I like the tainted lovers' kiss part. good flow, nice message, it was good

your servant:
atticus

Very dark with a nice flow to it. Strong choice of words too. Love it :D

Nice poem. Deep, so there will probably be different interpretations. My fave lines were:
Love is life and
Love is death.
Take care =)
~ Lainey

X

Very nice.. I liked the contrast between the two. keep it up..

ctmskh

~slaps knee~ well shut my mouth

that just bout sums up my love life

A little dark for me but i like it

Hi Bree,
I thought this was well written with a good rhyme scheme to it. Well thought out and nicely arranged. I also thought the theme was a little too dark for your particular style it seems. But that is just the impression I was left with; it could be others would view it differently. I still 5/5'd it easily...keep up the good work.
Michael

Hi Bree,
I thought this was well written with a good rhyme scheme to it. Well thought out and nicely arranged. I also thought the theme was a little too dark for your particular style it seems. But that is just the impression I was left with; it could be others would view it differently. I still 5/5'd it easily...keep up the good work.
Michael

U write really maturedly

I love your poem you are a very talented writer 5/5 Steve

What a wonderful poem.

" Love is life and
Love is death "

What a beautiful lines.
I think you did a great job on this poem.
Take care

Nice descriptions of love, unfortunetely you don't always get to know what type of rose you plucked intil its already stabbing itself into your chest. love is life and death, i like that. its true, the highs and lows do feel like that.
great write, keep it up.

Wow!..this is an amazing poem.love it!..wel done!

Heart wrenching and pain staking. The sting of thorns coming from roses of love is indeed very painful.

I like the flow on this and how you were able to intertwine the happy and sad.. the beginning and the end.

---Sher

This is good....i like the message behind it.. the only thing i didnt like was the rhyming. it seemed to go..everywhere..in some places it rhymed and in other places it didnt. so that kinda threw the flow off. i give you a 4/5 on this one.

I like the fact that it is simple but very discriptive at the same time but keeping the fact that it is a poem.

hang on a minute does that make any sense at all...

Excellent!
so deep, and vocab is great! but honestly i dont get the meaning of it! lol..by the way..the 1st part grabs the readers attention well!!

keep it up!

I really like this...it was very well written.
thanks for the comment!

BabyGurl

This is very good cant wait 2 read more