Remember Me

by Twisted Heart   Aug 18, 2007


Upon the door of death I stand
Head hangs in wistful shame
About to take a step beyond
Soul tossed for one to claim.

My life is passing by inside
My mind so clear to see
One request I ask of God
"In heaven remember me".

I see the perils of my life
The choices I made wrong
The pain I felt because of them
No laughter in the song.

The many times I walked away
Refusing all your pleas
But now I ask with all my heart
"In heaven remember me".

The tears of loss I feel them still
so strong upon my soul
Bitter sadness fills the mind
Refusing to let go.

But as I stand upon the path
A threshold there to be
"Wrap your arms around my heart
and in heaven remember me".

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  • 18 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    You should put this on your featured list. I really like this poem. Good job.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Jeannie what an incredibly moving poem!

    But as I stand upon the path
    A threshold there to be
    "Wrap your arms around my heart
    and in heaven remember me".

    ^^^
    Such a touching ending stanza *wipes tear*
    Much love Auntie
    Luanne

  • 18 years ago

    by Kris

    It is a very touching poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie
    This is so beautiful. Sad but very moving.

    But as I stand upon the path
    A threshold there to be
    "Wrap your arms around my heart
    and in heaven remember me".

    This stanza is so heartfelt.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

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