Look through my windows

by Jaded Serenity   Aug 19, 2007


Look through my windows,
deep down to my soul.

Do you see the secrets?
The dark little shadows that hide behind my heart.

Look through my windows,
deep down to my soul.

Do you see the hate?
That dark blight splattered across my heart.

Look through my windows,
deep sown to my soul.

Do you see the pain?
It shrivels my heart.
Is it still beating?

Do you see the picture of my heart?
Do you see the tears flowing down my face?

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  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    I like the idea with the different format. Well written. makes you keep reading. Very emotional and heart felt

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    You must have deep pain during written this poem. Great job. Beautiful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    I like the concept of this, just one thing the last 'deep down to my soul' you hit the s button instead of the d. Figure that I'd let you know.

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