Winter Break.

by Brittany   Aug 20, 2007


Winter has never been my season,
Falling apart for every random reason.

You think because there's tears I'm crying,
And I think because you're not here you're lying.

We've been so concerned and so far apart,
I haven't had time to listen to my heart.

Time is just speeding by us at an unstoppalbe rate,
I'm so confused, this can't be fate.

I need to let go, I need all this to break,
If not for you, then for my own sake.

It's time to stop playing this game,
I can't pretend that we're still the same.

I'm going to pack my bags, and put on my coat,
Catch the bus, take a plane, or board a boat.

Sorry I have to leave this way,
And say things I never thought I'd say.

Maybe one day I'll be able to give it another try,
But please for now, accept my goodbye.

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I liked it...It was penned really well.
    The flow was really good...
    The story behind it was really good..
    && I loved the ending.....
    Overall 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem with mournful feelings nicely depicted. The word choice is beautiful and the flow is great. 5.5

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Unstoppalbe

    should be unstoppable

    Anyways, I like this. Has a lot of feeling to it. I like how you ended it and explained a little about the relationship. However I do agree with the person above about the title, doesnt quite go with the whole poem, only the first stanza. And on the second stanza I didnt quite get it, I think its just or I'm reading it wrong, I dont know. But overall I liked it. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I liked it very much..though not sure if i like the title of it cause it really only fits the first stanza..but overall i liked how you described the ending of the relationship and the poem seemed to flow well and had feeling to it..keep up the good work!

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