You Made Me Whole

by kia   Aug 21, 2007


I know you're about to leave
We're soon to be over
I don't know if I'm glad I met you
Or sorry I ever came to know you
You showed me what I was missing
You made me feel whole
But when you depart your going to take away my centre

As much as I love you
I can't seem to keep you
Every time you see me
Is one less visit to look forward to before my end
Don't ask me not to be anxious
And then ignore me
Don't say you still love me
And then leave me alone to cry

Don't push me away
And tell me nothings wrong
When i ask you why
I know it's entirely my fault
I'm fortunate you ever loved me
But please don't keep pretending
Until we're finally through

I know I'm not going to make it
Just wish you'd tell me too
I need to be warned before you leave
Because I need to end it believing you still love me true
I want to finish at my highest point
Whilst you love me like new
I don't want to cease to exist reminiscing of how I made our love fade

I've always loved you more than any other
I loved you before I laid eyes on you
And in spite of everything I still love you now
I can't watch us wither and die
It's tearing me in half
As soon as we're through
I'll be gone too

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  • 16 years ago

    by Matthew Betts

    Kia..........This poem is outstanding, your words herein have told the exact story of what my poems do yet with one difference. You have an ability that i do not, you can write your poems crisp and clear without the necessity of rhyme. You are a fantastic poet Kia and i would love to chat with you some time about your poems. If i may quote 1 phrase

    **I've always loved you more than any other
    I loved you before I laid eyes on you
    And in spite of everything I still love you now
    I can't watch us wither and die
    It's tearing me in half
    As soon as we're through
    I'll be gone too**

    This, for all of you who dont know me, this is an epiphany of my life. You truely are talented. Keep up the GREAT work.

    Matt

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This was very emotional.. The pain, and the confusion, are all portrayed strongly in this peice. I can relate to this, cause something similar is happening to me.
    It's scary,
    To know your pushing away the one thing that will make you happy...

    I really enjoyed it this perfecttly penned poem,
    5/5 Elaine

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Very well written if i may say. It is sad though, but still very nice 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Strong last line there and related to this poem so i know its hard. good job xxxx

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