It was many things

by Melissa   Aug 21, 2007


It was the way he smiled
with those eager blue eyes
that tickled my belly
until a fit of giggles
erupted within
and god it felt oddly familiar
yet unmistakably new

It was the way his tongue
embraced mine
with such comfortable ease
that needed not words to define
what poetry in motion truly was,
a poem was writing itself
and we were the scenery

It was the way he said hello
with no hint of goodbye
creeping it's way
to his lovely voice
and how love sounded
from gracious lips
that made me fall so hard

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    THis poem is written very well. I loved it. It' filled with a lot of emotion. Keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by swill

    The grace kelly of poetry...yes, i concur...

  • 16 years ago

    by OHgreenman

    Can definatly feel the love in this piece...really liked the flow and style...great job!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Loved it!
    a poem was writing itself
    and we were the scenery
    Those lines really stood out. I have nothing bad to say about this poem. Perfect!

    Sarah