And Even Though I Called It Off...

by DontForgetTonight   Aug 23, 2007


And even though it was me
Who said it's over, leave me be
The hurt he feels runs through my veins
I think of him as i cross the lane
Away from his house and over to mine
I'm wondering, did I ever cross the line?

He looked at me with deep dark eyes
And in those eyes hatred and despise
I've never felt this way
As my heart has always been broken
And has never been a part of breaking someone Else's

I feel guilt
I feel sorrow
I feel that I shouldn't live to see tomorrow

And even though I called it off
I just wish we could have been.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxXKristie MarieXxX

    I'm sure there is more to this story than what is being told. B/c I kinda get what your saying. But this is one of those poems that needs to completly told. Keep it up!

    XxXKristie MarieXxX

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    I've never been in that situation..&& I hope I wont ever be...
    I couldn't imagine making the one I love feel the pain I feel when I felt heartbreak...
    Good Poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    The ending was a twist..but it fit nicely. You probably did the right thing(breaking up with him)whether it seems like it now or not. Good piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    This is sweet, yet sad. I know the feeling. But even though it doesn't feel like it, sometimes it just isn't meant to be. Keep writing, hun! 5/5

    Liz =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Wow really good like it alot keep it up your really good
    _forever carly_

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