Maiden On The Sky Breeze

by Wallace   Aug 23, 2007


As thy lustful eye rests upon thy fair maiden
So doth my heart yearn for ones true love?
With beauty out-reigning literal imagination
More than ever shall thyself fear above

Redeemed with grace whilst jilted by woe
Patented in all ways yet usual as men
Gifted with elegance nor bombast in words
Laced with vast blessing cannot thou be penned?

Laid upon solemn dignity treasured deep in thy soul
Hearst's thy quest for love's esteemed favor
So shall thy reside nor pleasure such attainment
Yet in delightful cheer, endorse upon thy savior

Enchant a lover's call upon thy dead soul
Surround ones heart so thou may rest at ease
Draw nearer so I may set aside to, my
Dear beloved fair maiden on the sky breeze

*****Hidden in the poem is the name of an author, on this site that has been like a big brother to me, have fun finding it:)*****

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  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    The title drew me in to this one, and the poem itself lived up to it. Awesome choice of vocabulary. Great job. And, thanks for the comment. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Decent write, but... again... Flourishing the words too much. You're indeed a talented writer... but I don't feel your poems as much as I could.

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I love it. The old English again really set a mood, nice work. xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This is such a beautiful piece of art.

    The flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, the imagery was fantastic, and coupled with the content, concept and wording, every aspect of this poem came together to create a truly beautiful read.

    I have no idea who the author is, but nevertheless, this is just beautifully written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Yes this one is one of your masterpieces. Superb imagery and coherent and cohesive lexis used. Poeticallya nd lexically strong. Hats off to this piece :)

    tc
    Fsams

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