Dear Diary

by LovelyDivine   Aug 24, 2007


Dear Diary

Dear Diary,
I have a secret to tell
There's this boy
He's stolen my heart
And fills it with joy.

Dear Diary,
Please tell me
Could he be the one?
The one who'll see
Me for who I am?

Dear Diary,
This boy's got it all
He knows how to make me smile.
He treats me like royalty
Makes it all worth-while.

Dear Diary,
I think this will go far
I see us with a future.
If I wish upon a star
My wish just might come true.

LovelyDivine

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Good poem. the repition is nicely used and it clearly shows the function. Keep up the good work

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    It was cute! you repeated dear diry over and over which i think kind of messed up the flow but other than that well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I thought this poem was really cute!=]..and thank you for the comment on my poem, i really do appriciate it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like it. Repetition in the first stanza( with the word"heart") destroys flow. It isn't bad but you could create stronger atmosphere.

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