Unfamiliar Territory

by LovelyDivine   Aug 21, 2007


I've felt the touch of your hand
Your arms wrapped around me.
Wrapped in your loving embrace
I feel your lips upon mine.
Your hand is creeping down
To a place of unknown.
Grabbing your hand
Caressing it in my own,
You lead my hand down
To someplace new.
We're growing closer to each other
As we uncover unfamiliar territory.

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  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Short and sweet. i loved this poem. nicely done. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Atrum Dominatio Donum ut is Letalis of Regnum

    Short and sweet is an accurate term for this poem, nicely written and a good portrayal of feelings.

    5/5 for this one, well done :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent my dear poet. The word choice is superb and the connotations evoked by the lexis makes this piece outstanding. 5/5 all the way

    I love your style
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I think it was a very good poem. Using the last words as the title is really effective, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    I really feel the passion here, the warmth that comes from the images you give, it is much deeper even after I reflect over it. Good short one.

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