Love love love this poem
I was copying this piece, and then I just started copying like ALL of the poem :) so I just want to say I can relate to every sentence you wrote down
it's really a fabulous poem, specially cause I understand the pain you're feeling, I'm kinda going through the same and Ireally hope you're feeling better
:)
Sarah ; and keep up the good work cause I really love your work, honestly.

I really like this its very well written
i give it a 5/5 good job

V'ry v'ry good poem, just so darn sad. it flows very nicely.
sometimes guys can just be total asses :\

ReallR itS a lovelY lonG piecE oF worK entirelY witH proper expressionS and thE commentS abovE arE perfectlY correcT... 5/5

luzaN

This poem made me feel your pain...the emotion was great and it flowed so smoothly...excellent job...& if you wanna talk, im here=]

Brooke<3

Hey,
I think its an awesome poem, the flow is good, there is only one tiny thing I don't like and that is in the second stanza, you wrote: and for those two years, it sounds better when it is without the and,--->'' for those two years'', and it also important that you use capitals. the poem really shows that you loved him and that he hurt you, its a very well written poem! 5/5
kisses stephanie

Heyy
this poem was very touching
it was very well written, and shows a lot of emotion in all of the stanzas.
i really liked the last stanza, because it says played your cards right, and that hit me, cuz i recently got played bad by a boy.. and it left me heartbroken... so ya this was a great poem. i really enjoyed it! :)
keep up the good work!
5/5
xoxo, mEgAn**

I really like it. I can feel the sadness and the pain.

OMGGGGG THIS IS LIKE TOTTTTTTTALLY great. this kinda reminds me of what i went through but its sad though lol but still its great :)

Beautifully well written..I like this poem..actually I luved it..
U r a good writer..
Good job..the poem was emotional..
Well done.
-sarah

Beautifully well written..I like this poem..actually I luved it..
U r a good writer..
Good job..the poem was emotional..
Well done.
-sarah

I like the ending, its kinda twisted...ilike this poem

Yeah this is a very deep poem and i really like it
its very well written and jsut great

Wow, thats funny I know exactly how you feel, and i'm in the same situation, with my ex. and his name is Brandon too lol so I thought it was a funny thought, but this is such a great poem! and i hope you keep holding on strong k girl. 5/5 nice job.

Sad but i loved it it was really emotional and i love those kinda poems 10/10 good job

Great poem

Wow, that was amazing. it was very heartfelt and emotional. and a little bit of my own opinion, he did not deserve you and there was one part where you said that you were picking yourself up and told him not to phone you, good job! inspiring poem, keep writing!
xjessx

I love it!!!!

5/5

Wow the emotion and sadness pours out in every line and word of this poem it is just ....(speechless) 5/5

That was a truly amazing poem. its soo full of pain and love i love it <3 you are an amazing writer!