by Sachi Aug 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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She walks along the path |
by x Mo x
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Wow! That was beautifully sad. It felt pained. I really liked the feelings it eminated. Your words also painted a very sad image in my head...but they painted it well. I like how you dont use a rhyming scheme which makes your poetry seem so different from the usual run of the mill poems. Keep it up! |
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I think this is a really good poem...i like it |