It's So Cold Inside

by Mezmeryz   Aug 27, 2007


The smile,
That brightens up your day,
So for that moment,
You have nothing to say.

The warmth,
That overwhelms your being,
So for that moment,
It's not about what you're seeing.

Her smile,
That brightens up your day,
May cover up cracks,
That under the surface lay.

Her warmth,
That overwhelms your being,
May be heat,
From a furnace you're not seeing.

And her face,
That breaks into a smile,
Can reflect her heart,
That's been breaking for a while.

And her eyes,
That try so much to hide,
Give a message,
That 'it's so cold inside'.

*please rate or comment on the poem, it will be greatly appreciated and i will comment and rate back all round. Thank- you.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    OMG hun.. its brilliant... i can totally relate to it and you've just kept it short, cold and to the point - luv it X

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow what a great description of saying its cold inside nice poem 4.5 that rounds up to a 5 lol maybe u can read one of mine.