Why????

by Hermosa   Aug 27, 2007


Why didn't it work out
why couldnt we fight for it
if we both swore love,
why was it so hard

Why did she have to show up
why did you have to lie
couldn't you have been truthful
maybe we would both be alright

Everytime you call me
You beg and cry that you sorry
how can i forgive you
you would only make me worry

I would worry about you cheating
I couldn't take the pain again
I would worry about her reappearing
the despair would surely kill me

please comment and vote i would really appreciate your opinions.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Fanny

    Very nice. I liked the emotion that i felt when i read this. Dont stop writing!
    -Stephanie

  • 16 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    I really liked this one and your good at making the emotions flow through the words which is the #1 thing I always look for =) I understand this poem a little to well sadly and I'm sorry if you actually had to go through it =P Two things though in the 14th line you need to capitalize the first "I" like you did in all the others and fix "tha" to "the" lols Other then that I loved it all certainly want to read more =) 5/5
    Rhea

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