A mind unafraid

by judith redmount   Aug 28, 2007


On a bridge to success
I like to eliminate my fear
My hunger, my hope
my uneven path is clear

Low-hanging clouds
pressure from above
my mind is not afraid
enough is not enough

Spears and swords
directed to my soul
no chance to destroy
I need to be whole

Words can not break
nor punish my mind
here, now and after
not before nor behind

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Wow, I really enjoyed this one. It has a sense of optimism and strength about it.

    This verse was beautiful

    'Words can not break
    nor punish my mind
    here, now and after
    not before nor behind'

    5/5 =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great poem with great consecutive rhymes. I loved the way it flows and is greatly strung throughout. Keep it up 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    This poem is a really greta poem, trhe subject is great and the wording is excellent
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by lish

    What a beautifully written poem, i love the feeling and emotion in it
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    I really enjoyed the wording of this, nice work, 5/5