You

by Gasmbaby   Aug 28, 2007


You started to undo my heart,
Slowly and gently you ripped it open.
You said it would heal,
But you tore it apart.

You got into my head,
And you wouldn’t leave.
You drowned me in all these lies,
You won’t let me breathe.

You said that you loved me,
But that was a lie
You said you would always be there,
But you left me to die

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  • 16 years ago

    by fragiledoll

    Gr8 work.
    makes me wonder about guys, & how its nearly impossible for them to not lie.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fake Facade

    Wow, really good poem. short and to the point.
    well short but it describes the emotion well.
    btw did i mention it was a great poem. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Lovely and sad. love the first stanza, could almost see it.....great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Sadddd and I put my imaginary through this.. Keep writting more!

  • 16 years ago

    by halie

    Wow its kinda sad but,
    very very good
    :]
    5/5
    keep writing
    :]

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