I'll always be there

by Jose   Aug 30, 2007


Even though we don't speak
Know that I'll never leave you
And even though we aren't together
Know that i can be the one for you to turn to
Turn to when you need someone to love you, hold you, when you can't take it any longer
I'll be right here to make you stronger
And if we ever get together
Know you'll never be alone
I'll always be in your heart
When you feel lost know that I'm praying for you
And whenever you need me all you need to do is call
That's all
I'll be there
I'll always care
Care for you
But you don't know
Don't know that i would die for you
That i want you
Want to kiss you, hold you, make you mine
Gaze into your eyes
Instead of sitting here and whine
And even if you don't love me back
I'll still always be here
Because I'll always care
Care for you
But you don't know
Don't know that my love for you is unconditional
Scream at me, ignore me, whatever you want
I'll still always love you
I'll still always be here
Be here for you
But you don't know
Don't know that you're perfect to me
You could have the biggest scar on your face
But you'd still make my heart pace
Because no matter what, I'll always care
Care for you
And I'll always be there
There for you
Even though
Even though you don't know

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    LOVE IT!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    Luv it good job...your talented..keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by jennifer leigh

    Hey
    thanks for your comment
    i love this poem
    can relate to it heaps as he other comments above say
    keep up the great work!
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I like this poem. Excellent wording and it has a somewhat good rhythm but great flow. I think you should put it in stanzas because of the repetition you have in the poem. On these two lines:

    "I'll still always love you
    I'll still always be here"

    You should take of the word 'still' I read it without and it sounded a lot better. Great job on this one. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by emmerz

    This was really great! and i agree with the whole rhyming thing, but this poem - just because of the message and the feel of the poem, it doesnt need to all rhyme. it grabbed my attention, and i think there WILL be many of people who can relate to it, whether they feel that way towards someone or someone feels like that about them.

    amazing job!
    -Em ♥