Very lovely poem. nice to read. it shows that the writer, i mean you know the real meaning of love.

"I will not let you in my life"

i loved your this line alot. its a just line but i feel the deep way this lines let me go in her arms. great job 5/5

Wow a heart felt poem of love i could feel the emotion i loved it 5/5

Lovely, so sweet, and such a nice story behind it. Loved the use of repetition in every third stanza.
"Do you dare ask why"
really added to the flow. great job!

It had such a beautiful story behind it, and i love the way you used do you dare ask why, in the repetition, is was amazing. the structure was great and the flow was perfect, nice work. 5/5

I like this poem, your emotions felt close to mine.

Excellent..you did describe it well..your feelings, the thoughts it flowed out right..well same as your old ones..5/5 for it!!

This was a beautiful and heartfelt poem. it really had a great flow to it, and it was so sincere, i felt the emotions you had put into this poem. it was wonderful and i loved it, terrific job, you're a great writer.

I really enjoyed this from start to finish, I found this to be such a beautiful piece. This poem touched my heart and gave such an emotional sensation over my soul. It was such a sweetly sad read. To me this came straight from your heart and flowed nicely into such an elegant piece of poetry. Capturing and heartfelt. Well done on writing this truely deserves a 5/5 ~Mel

Lovely poem, very heartfelt and beautiful. Wonderfully written. You expressed your emotions marvelously. I loved the repetition of the title in the beginning. Very effective. I can also relate to some parts of it.
Excellent job. 5/5

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

Wow! this poem just really takes my breath away mainly because i can feel every word of this poem..i've been there..it's hard to have so much love for a friend. this stanza, in particular, touched me:

"Do not ask me to stay
because I will without delay
I know in the end I will be hurt
If I do not push you away"

^it's like you i could have written that myself. it's amazing..you have so much emotion in it. just beautiful. great work! keep it up! =]
--Viola

I really like this poem as well! it is so well written and you can feel your emotions! its beautiful! GREAT job!

Love love love this one..I can really relate to this poem for I love someone that I cant have..and I truly believe in my heart that he has as strong of feelings. I also think our souls are linked though we can never be. The flow was great and the emotion was definitely there. Keep up the great work!

"It is because you are genuine"

simply beautiful. i'm still trying to toss up however whether there should be a question mark at the end of "do you dare ask why". or whether it was intended without it. so instead of asking the question you are simply both stating and giving the answer yourself to increase the modality. if that made sense. however another brillant write. xoxo

Great Poem!!

5.5**
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Let your souls be entwined and you get all the love you desire. This is what I WISH for you but your poem tells that its not possible at the moment and thats a sad news. Your poem has mournful feelings and beautiful descriptions of the qualities of your loved one. I loved the poem.

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It was very good. On some parts the rhyming was off but other than that it was pretty nice. I'll give it a four.

Ok, i thought it was a pretty good poem, but throughout the whole poem it seemed like the rhyming was forced and it just made the poem sound weird, and you also changed yoru ryhming pattern, but still id have to give you a 4/5

This is a very revealing poem that reflect a self knowledge and honesty that is rare
Without getting too personal it reminds me that we all must face our deepest fears in order to receive true healing. Very well written