Such a great poem!

"a guy who loves her laugh
even if she does it when he doesnt think it was funny.."

^^I laugh at everything so this relates to me so much!

Brooke<3

Awww so cute i really wish there was a guy out there like that, one that didnt let his friends control his every move and means what he says i loved it good job

Really love this poem and I absolutely love the ending
Hope you'll find all those qualities in a guy (or that you allready found them ; cause I hope your guy 's worth you ) :)
Good job,
Sarah x x

I think to make it a lil better, if you evened out the rhyming scemes a little bit more, so the lines weren't like...10 words, then 3 words, then 5 words etc.

I think this is a great poem, and with a bit more editing, will be a masterpiece! 5/5!

(ps-i dont know who CANT relate! way to word what we're all feeling)

Wow very long but worth the read.
i loved every stanza great write hun! =]]
I love your work =]]

I CAN TOTTALY RELATE TO THIS LOL ITS CUTE AND I THINK THE ENDING IS GREAT

I love the way you ended it DO not change anything about it:)
i love your poems i read alot of them:)

This is really a smile maker :) The perfect guy :) Nice job on your poem.
Take Care Cindy

Suggestion....maybe something about how there is a few guys out there that are like that you just have to look

I'd hopefully be able to say i am one of those guys.

Blease

Suggestion....maybe something about how there is a few guys out there that are like that you just have to look

I'd hopefully be able to say i am one of those guys.

Blease

I think this is the cutest poem ive read all day! hehe great job!
-amanda

Your wording for this poem is really great.

However the one thing that i would change is the flow. what i mean by this is the emphasis on each word or line. It doesnt quite match.

But otherwise, WELL DONE!

I loved it!!!!

I loved it.
It was amazing.
5/5 from me.

Devon<3

That was soo sweet!!!
hmmm the perfect guy... i really liked this!!!
n btw u dont need to change the ending its sweet as it is :)
ali x x x x

I Really Like This
Its Great
I Have To Admitt I Could Never Make A Poem As Good As That
You Give Me Insperation
5/5
Def On My Favs

I really like this i have to admit i connected with this one because i thought i had found that guy and now hes moved on... it very good and im gonna try and think of a way to help you end it...

liz

This was a great poem... i really liked it... keep it up <3

Nice, it's really cute!

5/5

Great job on the poem n thanx 4 da comment