Alright to cry

by judith redmount   Sep 2, 2007


Sitting under a tree
the wind flows and moves
I look at the clouds on top
and at the neighboring roves

I look at the leaves
that fall on the ground
Then the voice of a man
Loud, clearly it sound

" I hear what you're thinking"
"When I was passing by"
"I stopped, just to tell you"
"It's OK to cry"

"I will wipe all your tears"
"Let them flow, dot be shy"
"You're not alone. I'll Cary you"
"It is alright to cry"

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow superb dear. Its great and the flow is perfect. Loved each and every line in this piece :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a wonderful poem. it is wonderful how you brought nature into it. it has a sort of sad touch to it. it is an amazing poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    I gave this one a 5/5, simple but beautiful. Flow was really good too, and it has a sort of mystery about it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aaron Deevers

    Very touching poem, I truely can say you a poem with nature involved was great. nicely done 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kat

    Wow, that was very moving. I love how you brought nature into the poem. Very beautiful. 5/5

    ~Kat~

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