Have You Ever?

by babblingxbrooke   Sep 2, 2007


Have you ever had one of those days when life seems so unfair?
you give everything you have but receive nothing in return; no one seems to care?

have you ever had one of those days when you just want to runaway?
and to see who chases after you, who truely wants you to stay?

have you ever had one of those days when your walls come crashing down?
no one seems to hear you although your screams are what is making all the sound?

have you ever had one of those days when a chance is all you ask for?
a little help to turn the knob, to open up another door?

have you ever had one of those days when he's the only one on your mind?
but you know you can't have him so why are you wasting your time?

have you ever had one of those days when rejection is all you can feel?
he treats you like dirt but your feelings for him are surreal?

have you ever had one of those days when you resort to giving up?
you did everything you could but it just wasn't good enough?

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  • 13 years ago

    by Angel in moonlight

    This is a wonderful poem, I can relate so much to this. I've had those kind of days. I gave it 5/5 and added it to my favorites.

    ~Angel In Moonlight~

  • 13 years ago

    by Taylor

    I adore this.
    its completly amazing.
    im adding it to my favorites.
    its a deff. 5/5
    your an amazing writer.
    keep it up<3

  • 13 years ago

    by stacyneedsyou x3

    I love it!
    i'm going to add it to my favorites actually.
    it's obviously 5/5
    keep up the outstanding work! : )

  • 13 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this was really good! i definetly rated 5/5. and i know exactly what you mean in the poem =/ but great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by McKenna

    Wow...and the answer to all those brilliant questions..yes yes yes...and so on..XOXO 5/5