Last Chance

by MakeBelieveLove   Sep 5, 2007


My last chance
With one final dance
To make a simple wish
For at least one special kiss

Dreams of you coming true
Slowly turning my world blue...
Turning my beautiful dreams
Into violent screams

Memories of us, filled with tears
As the song ending nears
I can't believe you're leavin'
I'm trying to believe in

Us, but when the song ends
My heart begins to bend
This last dance
For my last chance

To tell you
That it is true
I do love you....

Not much to say about this poem things could change, but not sure how. Comment please.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Reapers ZeitGeiSt

    It's very good and touching...keep up ;) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nuh

    Ahhh.
    this is sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This really started out touching and sweet, and then there was this unexpected twist:D.. I thought it was really creative. ANd I love the concept.
    This poem is probably my favourite so far.
    Keep it up,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    A very good poem. I love the rhyming in this one. I woudln't change it at all. I can tell that it came from the heart. Good job!
    5.5
    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Wow, Gr8 poem!!!
    Keep it up!!
    =)

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