Meomries

by MakeBelieveLove   Sep 6, 2007


Look at me
Only a sad memory
Of what used to be

A beautiful sin
Tearing me limb by limb
As the lights dim

Darkness falls
My screaming calls
As my heart slowly falls

He doesn't love me
But that's just a memory
Of our sins running free.

Tonight's the night
That I will make it right
Pick myself up and show him the light.

Just A Little Thing about me trying to pull myself together...
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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Good poem in overall. The flow is good but the word choice needs to be improved. I know you have the potential and you can make it flawless

    tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This was well written.
    The wording you used was awesome, and I really thought your rymthing worked:)
    This peice was very inspiring.

    Well done,
    Elaine.

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    I liked this poem, probably my favorite out of yours. I only have the love one left to read. I like the rhyming, I like the idea, I like the ending. I loved the whole poem.
    5.5 easy... :]
    Ciao~

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    Good poem!!! I liked it alot!!
    Well written!!!
    5/5
    =]

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