Organic Tear Dust (Collab)

by Wallace   Sep 6, 2007


Falsified emotions rest dormant tonight
Upon sand stones of volcanic misery
Enormous tears of heartache shatter darkness
Simple dust winds cry a wayward souls destiny

Clusters of perpetuity crowned deep in thy heart
Stained agony submerged in ordeal abyss
Eternal forsaking unruly cry for value
Extended wails of distress persevere to exist

Certainty implodes the echoed messages
Beyond understanding of demise's glance
Travesties rupture mirrors of etched tears
Whilst the sunrise screams sorrow at dawn

Caustic emotions breed a bouquet of etched tears
Enchanting melancholy upon bitter fantasy
Erring to imperfection with faithless dreams
Crestfallen stars explode in heartbreak

*****This is a collab with Andrea Sunny. Here is her profile.******
http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=254952

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  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Its great when two people come together to create somthing like this. It was a really well written job xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I thought this poem was absolutely outstanding and once again your flow and word choice was perfect. The detail in everyline is matched in so few poems - excellent write as always 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Damn.... you both have left me speechless. You write very well together.

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Amazing poem! the wording is amazing. you can really tell you must have spent ages on it! loved the line "Crestfallen stars explode in heartbreak" great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    It was awesome..the words are too deep..haha!!
    and well in fact i don't really understand it..lol..
    keep it up!!