Maybe memories

by Veamm   Sep 7, 2007


Framed memories on the wall,
reminding me of my past life,
the thoughts and my emotions,
the distresses on my mind,

faded clothes, things in dust,
reminding me of the deep scars,
the pain and my struggles,
and all of my abandoned tasks,

Forgotten photographs on my heart,
reminding me of my missing pride,
the tears and my self-esteem,
the afflictions that i hide,

Broken mirrors on the floor,
reminding me of the despair,
the efforts and my time,
the life that i can't repair.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    I love the title, that caught my eye and made me want to read it, and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed this one, again. It portrays a lot of emotion, your vocab was good, and the flow also. Your poems are all fairly short, yet they express and say a lot. That is sometimes hard to do, so well done.

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I liked it alot
    i think that you wrote this very well
    the flow was amazing
    and it was filled with depth

    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by kimberly

    So very true! Like alot

  • 16 years ago

    by Eagleman

    Thanks for the memories

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow, i loved the words you used, it was not simple at all. it was deep and just awesome, 5/5

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