Treasure

by Veamm   Sep 10, 2007


Treasure

Eyes gaze towards the wet sand
wondering to find some valuables
expecting for some alteration
and to have slight soul reborn

hands excavated deeper and deeper
hoping for such things to retrieve
now my hands grasp through the sand
searching beneath for some relief

i plowed,from day through to night
wasting so much time extracting out
yet,i still probing far for this
believing a treasure to be found

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  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Truly this one didn't intrest me that much
    Sorry must be my point of view.

  • 16 years ago

    by Leon

    Sounds like your a seeker... good work. keep it coming

  • 16 years ago

    by janiL

    I loved it!^__^

    life IS like an endless search beneath untold impediments.. we just hope our efforts would someday bear fruit..

    good flow! great theme! great wordings!
    brief yet amazing! 5/5!!=)

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    A nice poem.. like this one it was short but it says a lot about the truth in life, how it works and its meaning but the defition only differs on how a person viewed it/ on their own perspective. very well penned.keep up the good work

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