Let Me Be Free

by katy   Sep 11, 2007


Along time we have been together,
Hearts entwined,
Souls merged,
Love for one another so strong,

We take a trip,
Get behind the steering wheel,
You sit next to me,
Smiling at me,
So happy,

Driving down the street,
You turn my head and kiss me,
Our lips meet,
As i carry on driving,
60 miles an hour,

Head on collision,
Blacked out,
Blood pouring from my neck,
As glass pierced me,

You scream with terror,
Cry with fear,
Shake with dread,
Fill up with emotion,

You grab onto me shouting my name,
Telling me to hang on,
Ambulance arrives,
Too late,

My spirit already released from my body,
Drifting away with the wind,
I died that night,
You escaped with only bruises,

That day,
Inside your heart died,
Soul died,
Body died,
Mind died,

Please,
I don't want you living in misery,
10 years later,
Let me be free,
Free me from your mind,

Let yourself be happy,
It wasn't you fault,
It was fate deciding,
My destiny,
Let me be free,
From your worries.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by XxTwisteDxxMinDxX

    Girl this poem is really good... not all poems have to rhym.. honestly i think the ones that dont rhym are the best cause when u try to rhymn it.. you over think the emotion and its less powerful.. but this one is really good

  • 16 years ago

    by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX

    Wow ur poems are all very long i llvoe them

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this poem is simply amazing. i really liked it a lot. it had so much emotion in it. what a great job you did writing it. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    A powerfully sad message within your words.... One needs to carry on with life, memories are good to have but don't dwell, carry on and live....

  • 16 years ago

    by Kris

    DOUBLE WOW!!!
    It's so sad,and it's very good.

More Poems By katy