Explore outside

by Veamm   Sep 12, 2007


Explore outside

I forged preparations
to renew sanctuaries
Draw definite charts
locate all boundaries

investigate chambers
explore more secrets
see hidden territories
to meet more friends

escape the universe
surpass the stars
build new memories
place my feet on mars

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    I really like the words you used. it expresses a lot, and it had a nice flow and it was just really good i thought...i think you are a VERY good writer...keep it up!

    BabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by elmahdy

    U really good in telling ur ideas, i like ur way in expressing ur feelings

  • 16 years ago

    by Shauna

    Interesting..I Like It

    5.5**
    <33

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Now that was interesting. the way you put your words together is simply amazing. i loved every word of it. 5/5

Read All Comments (4)

More Poems By Veamm