Not Free

by Maria   Sep 12, 2007


A man went off to war that day.
Three children sat in bed to prey.

A lonely solider closed his eyes
as smoke from gunshot filled the skies.

A wife at home sat alone.
Scared to death she'd stay that way

she'd prey harder every day.
A solider now in the midst of war

had finally just found a door
a door that opened to his heart

a piece of him that could not part.
A wife, three kids still held his heart.

His mind went back to the war,
but something happened not intended

two shots and his life had ended.
Three children sit in church today

ready to make their first prayer.
One for father safe and sound

walking on the holy ground.
One for mom to fill a hole

that lay deep down inside her soul.
Final words must be said

a woman stands on behalf the dead.
She shuts her eyes says let it be

my heart has told me freedoms not free

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  • 16 years ago

    by Insanity

    Humm I have to agree with the othe comments amazing poem. However I am still going to point out it could be better the rythem of the peom is amazing exept for a couple lines that you could rewrite to make it better.

    line 1
    A wife at home sat alone.
    Scared to death she'd stay that way

    line 2
    His mind went back to the war,
    but something happened not intended

    other then this great peom loved it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Wow.. first i wud like to ask.. how did u write this.. this is just amazing.. u've just summarized freedom.. in a diffrnt way.. but so beautiful.. n so touching..

  • 16 years ago

    by Dusty J Schultz

    That is sad, very well written, sends chill down my spine, good job.