I know you can't be mine

by ECILA ice   Sep 13, 2007


Standing beside the window
Waiting 'til dust to dawn
Hoping to catch a familiar shadow
Whom she could call own...

Dreaming like a little child
For one great fairy tale to unfold
Praying like an innocent creature
Waiting her own story to be told;

Yet fate seems so unkind,
For dream will remain merely as an illusion.
And that tale will only be kept in her mind,
Forsaking her hopes, forever it will stay as a delusion

And those dreams will soon be vanish
Together with her little fantasy
Her ideal guy will soon be abolish
'Coz dream can't always be brought into reality.

** i'm having this writer's block.. wooh but still tried to write anyway hope you like it..

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  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww. Beautiful! I think you did a good job with this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Not bad for writers block

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    It was beautiful. I pictured all in my head, just beautiful. Still had a sad tone to it, a lot of emotions you have put in this.
    Wonderful write, even when having a writers block.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is really good if you have writers block when you wrote it. The flow was wonderful and the wording was perfect. 5/5

    Kalee , thanks for your comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    I liked it i know writers block hate it 4/5