Look

by Onoitsmandie   Sep 14, 2007


Look in to my eyes
Tell me what you see
The pain i hide inside
The person that is me.

Look deep within
Past all that is fake
And then you'll start to wonder
Why i have yet to break.

Look real close at me
You can tell my smiles not real
You can see all that i hide
And the pain that i feel.

Look in to my heart
In pieces on the floor
Every time it heals
It breaks even more.

Look inside my soul
Tell me what you see
A girl who has been crushed
That girl is actually me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marina

    Aww sweety. i love this one!! very nicely expressed! much love sweety.. i'm here if you wanna talk babes... 5/5 way to go!
    -Marina

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    I can really relate to this poem, I have a few like it...nice write, it flowed smoothly

    Brooke<3