Sometimes I Wear A Mask

In the secondstanza you say you wear a mask sometime so that no one will EVER know. that does not match well.
and the last two lines are unnecesarily adjusted.

i will give 4/5 though this poem dint appeal much but keep writing:-). we all are learners

This poem gave me chills because it was so wonderful. Fantastic job! The poem made perfect sense, you didn't lose me one time. Though it was short, it was great! 5/5 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Good poem, the last stanza was a bit forced though dont you think...

good job overall like the idea of the mask to hide emotion

Sad, yet very nice.

Great job!!!

5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Nice piece! Loved the repetition and the abab rhyming of it all. You've got talent and I look forward to reading more of your work!
Charisma*