Everyone could see that she was in deep pain
she wished to vanish through the rain
didn't even get the chance to say goodbye
eyes wide open day and night
overwhelming despair she just couldn't fight
for a shattered heart wont get her by
Hmmmm..dunno what to say thank u both 'RoZE' and 'Mums Pink Princess' so much for ur compliments :) u made my day!!
its my first try and i hope that this experience takes my writing to a more mature level..