Our world

by darkenlight1   Sep 15, 2007


Are you looking up at the same blue sky as me?
Are you laughing at the same joke as me?
Are you crying at the same story as me?
This world is just a story
comming to an end.
They sit and stare upon us
not looking for a friend.
They want to make us loser our hope.
Our we crumbling?
We practice for the future
but is there a tommorow?
With all of the fighting and killing,
who even cares?
I care.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gabriel Antonio White

    Dam sista! u got soul! lol. nice poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Veamm

    Excellent!

    very descriptive..reality is such a shit..im afraid that someday we will end up in destruction..

    keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow!! like the comment above me, very very powerful. this poem is very very good!! its great. i cant even describe how great. its just that meaningful. great job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by audrey harris

    Wow. powerful poem, very well written 5/5

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