Sadistic

by Beautiful Chaos   Sep 15, 2007


I'm crawling through this desert,
Drinking blood and bone,
I have wandered off the path,
I cannot find my home,
Will you reach a hand to me,
And take me from this place,
Where evil floats upon the wind,
Yet leaves behind no trace,
Will you save my soul today,
Or do you love to see,
The devil and his toothy grin,
Consuming all of me.

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  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    O.O
    I am stunned into silence at the awesomeness of this poem.
    ok so that was a little overdramatic but I really don't know what to say except I loved it.
    definite 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The flow in this was wonderful. It was quite a dark poem, eerie, yes. It was short, but perfect that way. Told a story; a dark tale, if you like. I loved it. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by marilyn marti

    Very eerie but in an amazing way! i loved it! so deep and sooo well put..good job..take care

    Marilyn~

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I...I don`t even know what to say right now; need a minute to catch my breath lol. Wow, just wow...this is absolutely amazing..too short, needs more, I want to read more ! Lol..very good job Darling, I am speechless, yet again.

    5.5
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    I also first read this in the competition forum and it captivated me! Goes straight to the favourites and I'm very keen to check out some more of your work, you have amazing talent.

    Sam

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