Clearing Clouds

by Dawn Millington   Sep 15, 2007


Clearing Clouds

High up here I watch the sea
The wind it blows like a gale past me
The sea is crashing against the shore
But its peace and quiet
What more could I ask for
Time to think be on my own
I' d rather stay here than have to go home
To get in a boat and sail out to sea
On my own I' d be set free

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andy

    Really quite good!
    You have a good use of words and i think you should put some more up for people like me to read :)!

    6/5 haha :)

  • 16 years ago

    by willowoman

    This is very good you should keep righting I give this a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Wow beautiful poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    This is a great poem, Dawn. It conveys a whole lot of feeling in minimal words - a very tricky thing to master.

    I'd love to go over it line by line and offer you some suggestions if you don't mind. I can send them to you in private message.

    Let me know.

    Hope you enjoy your stay here, and I can't wait to see more of your poems!

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Hey, pretty good even if it was short.

    your servant:
    david

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