Two hearts

by Essence Hope   Sep 16, 2007


Two hearts combined as one,
You and I forever until death,
Our love for one another begun,
When I took my first living breath.

Lying by your side each night,
Listening to your heartbeat slow,
A flame inside of me does ignite,
And brightly it will always glow.

I look into your eyes and I see,
All the love that you have to give,
All the love you've gave to me,
And all that helps me love and live.

I'll never stop loving you with all my heart,
And my body aches to hold you near,
Every second that we will spend apart,
I'll shed one single lonesome tear.

© Essence Eloise Hope Pankhurst
16/09/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    All to often do authors use the abab rhyme scheme, and you can see where rhymes were mushed in just to fit the form...but you certainly dont have that problem, you kept form while making the poem run smoothly, its very hard to do and you truly do have amazing talent, keep up the good work

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This reminds me of my boyfriend, a poem which other people can relate to is hard to do because you hold a high responsibility, i think this was pulled offf :D a few minor flaws but still good xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    perfect flow.
    It was amazing, it had a kind of beat to it. haha.
    I liked it. (:
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is sooooo beautiful!!! i love the emotion your pouring into your poems...the flow and wordage was wonderful...reminds me of my fiance'...keep it up hun, you definatly have a talent in writing! i can't wait to read more from you!

  • 16 years ago

    by George

    Haha...you're making me cry...the fact that your love poems are making me cry definitely means they are perfect...keep up the good work. If I can't write them anymore I need to read wonderful ones like these...

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