The spirit of romance

by Essence Hope   Sep 23, 2007


Lying with you under the stars, the sound of my heartbeat is the only sound,
Not a single thing in the world could compare with this love I have found,
As you touch my face, a tingling rushes through my spine leaving me weak,
There’s a satisfying feeling inside my soul that leaves me unable to speak.

Dining with you in a little restaurant, music feels the air with a melody so sweet,
I think back to all I have lost and gained, and suddenly I feel complete,
I have been given a chance to love and I have grasped it with all of my heart,
And there is nothing in the world that could tear what we have apart.

This is the spirit of romance that will walk with us through our times together
It is the spirit that means so much and I believe that this time it means forever,
You are the light in my darkest days, the flame inside my once empty soul,
You are the man of my dreams and the one person who makes me eternally whole.

© Essence Eloise Hope Pankhurst
23/9/07

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  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    Its always great to see work of new authors, they bring such a fresh form to the table and this poem was amazing, keep up the good work!

    andrew

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Brilliant i loved how you used language to convey meaning it was really good you should post more hun :D xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked the poem.
    It's amazing, dear.
    Almost flawless.
    Though, I wasn't too fond of the rhyme "together and forever" the two lines did go together and fit the poem perfectly though.

    5/5
    Once again.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Awww...i just don't know what to say, ALL of your poems are just so beautifully written && perfect with the emotions you pour into them!!!! Very good, and again, BEAUTIFUL! keep it up!

    take care
    Jenna

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Nice work, this shows so much emotion. Barring the paste errors it was beautiful. Very nice work.
    5/5

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