Your Dead To Me.

by Roxy   Sep 16, 2007


Tell me my 'love', Were you ever there?
Look sourfully into my eyes, Did you really care?
It's so sad that you left me with no other choice,
Though now that I know I have my own voice...

I'll caress the dagger whilst it pinches your skin,
Demolish your thoughts,Huni the Devil will win.
You should know by now I'm your worst fear,
You should have never cheated on me my dear!

Break down your dreams,Turn them into dust,
Show you the pain I felt,Make you never feel lust.
Tell you your nothing,Then cut loose the chain,
Let you fall so hard then lift you back up again.

Explain to you why life can be such a bit-ch,
Your like a spreading virus,A god damn glitch.
Once I lift you back up,I'll pretend to be your friend,
But Uh Oh, I'll just lead you to another dead end.

Save you from whats right but tell you to do wrong,
Screw up your life whilst I'm humming 'our song'.
You should know by now I shall never let you be,
Remember my buttercup, Your dead to me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Roxy

    LOLLL maybe its because Im english then =P

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    "Tell you your nothing,Then cut loose the chain,
    Let you fall so hard then lift you back up again."
    ^ the ryhm chain and again does not really work unless you pronounce again like a-gane (the old english way)

    but the poem expresses so much anger and pain.

    i love the idea of revenge used in this poem.
    you portraded it in a great way.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Wow, i love this poem, u have an awesome talent! it was so good. I love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    ....

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    ....you-are-Brilliant.. an AWESOME write.. thats what..
    loved what you did here ,

    "..Tell me my 'love', Were you ever there?
    Look sourfully into my eyes, Did you really care?
    It's so sad that you left me with no other choice,
    Though now that I know I have my own voice..."

    "..Save you from whats right but tell you to do wrong,
    Screw up your life whilst I'm humming 'our song'.
    You should know by now I shall never let you be,
    Remember my buttercup, Your dead to me! .."

    .. Amazing talent ,an amazing write , so well painted.. dark.. indeed.

    ~Wake~

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Wowawiow! :) I so loved your additude here, you made yourself looked so much bigger and stronger than the person who did that to you, and also how you used pet names. Showing your own strong character. Brilliant, you rock on, doll! :)
    Also it flowed very well. Very enjoyful read. Amazing.
    5/5

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