I love you,you love her

by Miranda   Sep 16, 2007


You know you still love her.
You try to hide it,but you do.
I hope you will stop pretending soon.
You also think you love me.
But I know the truth,
the heartbreaking truth.
How did you think I wouldn't notice?
that all of your love is bogus?
Please stop talking about her.
It breaks my heart with every word.
I can't stand knowing you love another.
and we both know were your heart is.
So don't say any more lies.
I know how I feel about you,
you know how you feel about her.
So if we both know the truth,
why are we still together?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Okay. i friggin loved this. filled with so much depth and emotion throughout the whole piece. i adore that ending..such intensity that it hits the reader like a slap in the face..beautifully done.

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I liked this a lot. Very emotional, which I always love. :] The flow was good, and the wording well done.

    I enjoyed the read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    That was great.
    It was a sad and emotional write. The flow was flawless & the word usage was good. :)

    "You know you still love her.
    You try to hide it,but you do."

    ^^
    Love those lines. Amazing job. Overall: 5.5 (:

    Sorry that it's taken me so long to return the comments.
    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

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