Cold snap

by Wings Of Flames   Sep 17, 2007


Cold Snap

The sun melted my skin,
My heart fluttered everyday,
Upon sight you are contagious,
And love had found its way,

But something was so cold,
And winter touched my heart,
Like the fingers upon water,
Like it was about to fall apart,

The rain didn't warm me,
As it fell hard and cold,
Hiding all I am today,
As life now unfolds,

Icicles shatter from my eyes,
And I gasp in despair,
A sudden realisation,
I wish I didn't care,

The pain I had found,
I fear when it turns,
The home I had warmed,
Suddenly it burns,

Forgotten I am scared,
Erased from your minds,
It's too late to undo,
What sadness always finds,

Rain shall fall,
Upon me alone,
Goodbye to you all,
Reborn to stone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Mm. I really like this piece! The bit about fingers on water was precious. I think this poem has a good depth to it, simple but beautiful imagery, and is cleverly written. 5/5 in my book!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Omg that was great you rock!!!!!= )

    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is an amazing poem. it is extreamely well written. the flow was wonderful and the rhyming was perfect. It is absolutley wonderfully written. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow! Excellent job you have done on writing this poem. It had an amazing flow to it and I really love the way you wrote it and what it was about. It's a very original poem. The rhyming was really good, too! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by Vacant Expressions

    It flows very nicely, sounds like it isnt being forced in anyway. I really like it, keep writing! :)

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