Rain [Haiku]

by Kristina   Sep 17, 2007


Rain falls from the sky
It makes a pretty sound
Drip, drop it falls down.

Copyright © September 14, 2007 - Kristina M

A Haiku is a Japanese style poem consisting of three lines with the syllable count 5, 7, 5.
A Haiku is generally based on nature, but can be about anything.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I guess you like rains =D anyway it was a beautiful Haiku, well done. I really like the 2nd line in this Haiku. keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This one also sounds cute and my original opinion stil stands with the previous haiku.

    kepp shining :)
    5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lethmelodis

    Very well done. Liked the fact that the last two lines rhymed :) I dont see much rhyming in Haiku forms. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Awww
    Drip drop it falls down
    That hit me in some way.. A good way. I really loved this short beauitful piece!
    5/5 B/c I LOVE RAIN

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I thought you did a good job on it. Since it was so short I can't say much but trust me it was a good poem. 5.

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