Weapons

by Veamm   Sep 17, 2007


Weapons

Launch fiery missiles
towards the atmosphere
Holy grenades explode
spreading such fears

Machine guns screams
played a death song
Rockets and mortars
fying around the zone

Weapons of destruction
created to claim life
Blood covered the soil
embedded with our pride

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    WOW!!! This poem is so true and you wrote it powerfully. Topic is great and idea of whole piece is amazing. Imagery is also good. You should be proud on this one!

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Powerful! Your style is intriguing.
    The last bit concluded well. A topic
    well worth writing about. Good message.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Nicely written great poem
    you have done a great job. keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    It was a short and very powerful read. The flow was flawless nad the imagery created was vivid and the piece a lot of depth. 5/5

    marcella

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    This was wonderful. It flowed really nicely.
    I really love the way you write your poems, You have a different style and it's awesome! Very original! 5/5

    ~Kristina

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