Puddle Pictures

by Krazy   Sep 18, 2007


September 17, 2007

Puddle Pictures

one year creeps by
every day passing near
a corner painting a picture.

to the common man purely invisible
to the blinding blue eye,
to the photographer, simply unmistakable

glassy smooth top it sits
muddy junk sinks to the bottom
a tree resides on the surface

one shot captures a new world
each one telling a different story
some of tall trees, others fields of yellow daisies

the rain created murals
lazily waiting for a colorful boot
splish splashing it's way down the street

those still pictures once calm
now reduced to far apart droplets
waiting to rejoin again

a puddle sits on that corner
everyday calling me to take its glassy photo
of the trees reflection resting on the surface

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  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Awesome write! Your name was given to me by someone who adores but I won't reveal the name...HAHAHA You have gained another fan! I love this piece! What a beautiful creative write...it has a beautiful spirit and I can't wait to read more!!!!! YES!!!! You're awesome m'dear!

  • 16 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    I LOVE this. It has long been a dream of mine to be a photographer, I`m going to college for it next year and this poem really stood out to me. It hit to my passion and I think that`s one of the things that really pulled me into this overall. You did a great job on this.

    5.5
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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, this piece is so effective and unique... very refreshing! You wrote it greatly and created superb imagery through whole poem with excellent choice of words and flawless descriptions. Whole piece has great atmosphere.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -the rain created murals
    lazily waiting for a colorful boot
    splish splashing it's way down the street-

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Now this is a very unique and creative write. Its amazing what we see reflected in puddles, I never really thought about it before until reading this. Thanks for sharing this wonderous delight with us.... well done.

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