Rainman.

by ghosts in bloom   Sep 18, 2007


He opens his eyes
Without optical counterpart.
Starflakes dance inside iris,
Spurning the stale gray cactus.
He washes and renews me
With invisible sweet salt
Every time he blinks.
Zip and unzip;
Feed to grow;
Nourished salutations.
I hear my soul
In his malapropos drizzle;
Calling me with glistening
And resplendent mystery
To dance with soil soaked feet.
An old dimension c'lapses
With omnipresent contentment.
I drink it all.
He is fervor.
The true panacea.

Copyright (c) Novalyn Grace 2007
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  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    What amazing imagery you've created with this piece... I'm actually at a loss for words now. lol
    It's beautiful
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Quite a different piece. I liked it alot though I must say.. Really deep and held such strong emotions. The imagery portrayed was great and your word choice I must say really powerful. An interesting poem which didn't lose its flow at all throughout the entire thing. Well done keep writing. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Your in my favourites. 5.5 (again)
    your imagery is amazing and your descriptions are unique, complex and mature.
    congratulations and i thank you for adding to the stream of talent in p and q

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Hmmm, that is certainly different.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very emotional and deep. I like it, rhythm of this poem is beautiful and I enjoyed in it. Topic is also very interesting and some lines are so effective. It deserves 5/5

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