Satisfaction

by Veamm   Sep 19, 2007


Satisfaction

My mind is satisfied
hands content to hold
The tears of laughter
eyes hungers for gold

Some happy memories
An elevated emotions
Raise towards the sun
I feel satisfaction

Fingers crawled down
lips release sweets
Indulge to fantasies
glide in your dreams

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nikki

    Very, very nice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Ending is fantastic and very effective. I enjoyed in this one, it is original and very positive. My favorite stanza is third, you created great atmosphere in this piece, and it is filed with emotions. It deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    I think you have a great talent in describing something with so little words. I enjoy reading your work. the flow is good (again).
    well I have nothing more to say except '' keep up the good work'' 5/5
    kisses stephanie

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