I Don't Want to be the Only Lonely One

by .K.i.T.t.Y.   Sep 19, 2007


I watch you fade into the distance,
While I am here teary eyed,
and heartbroken.

I know I shouldn't be this way,
You will return soon.

Yet in my heart,
I hold a fear
Of losing you forever,
Without you I may not last.

The thought of someone else
Stealing your heart,
Brings me pain,
And loneliness.

I miss you too much,
Please come home lonesome,
Needing someone to hold,
So then I'll know I'm not the only one.

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another old one.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a really nice poem. No one ever wants to be alone, and it is always sad when you are. Anyway this is a great poem. The wording and flow were wonderful. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by Travis

    I love this one, it's so realistic, and it's really... Great.

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    The structure in this piece is nice. It had a musicality to it I really liked. Raw and full
    of emotion. I enjoy how you did the ending.
    A unique piece, well worth another read!

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Hello my friend,
    i just want to say im really in love with your poems, you know how to write... great inspiration...

    keep it up like always.

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nice write, although not really a rhyming poem, it was still very good and flowed well. Great work, keep it up.

    Peace, Joe