Photos

by Veamm   Sep 20, 2007


Photos

Gape some photographs
from your childhood
notice the suffering
everthing is so rude

My tattered pictures
hide some ill pains
Flushed oaths and vows
it decompose my brain

Frozen photo albums
discharges such heat
Some auras made me dull
agony is all I need

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla Kay

    This is a really great poem.
    I love how you say sooo much without having an extremely long poem.

    Amazing 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I'm not gonna critique on the grammar of your poem, i could care less, the message of what it meant to me, is what is so much more important, when i read something this moving and powerful amd can look past little grammatical blah blah blahs, awesome job...!

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    The grammar in this threw me off, but I felt emotions seeping out of it. A dramatic and well written piece, with decent flow. Lovely work.

    Keep it up.
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by *~kat~*~broken reflection~*

    I love this poems, its great. i gave it 5. keep writing
    kat xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    I really liked this one. I gave it a 5.