I Hate You

by Pete   Sep 20, 2007


I hate how you look,
So incredibly vain.
I hate how you talk,
It drives me insane.
I hate that you're cocky,
Always making me fight.
I hate how you fidget,
Toss and turn in the night.
I hate that you smoke,
It's making you stink.
I hate all your arrogance,
You don't care what I think.
I hate that you're stupid,
Why can't you learn?
I hate your impatience,
You can't wait for your turn.
I hate that you're senseless,
You hurt me so much.
I hate how you feel,
I despise every touch.
I hate how you drive,
You've smashed up my car.
I hate your pessimism,
You're the worst thing by far.
I hate how you act,
I hate how you think.
I hate that you're ugly,
And how much you drink.
I hate you so much,
I can't express with a pen.
I hate that you've hurt me,
Again and again.
I hate that you stop me,
When I'm talking to girls.
I hate that you hate me,
You tell the whole world.
I hate that you don't care,
Why can you not see.
That the thing I hate most,
I hate the fact that you're me!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Ending is truly effective btw, I truly like last two lines of this poem, they are very deep.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like rhyming in this one too much, and I personally don't like word-hate- and I also think that you leaved bad impression with repetition of that word. All in all it isn't bad poem, that is just my opinion but honestly I didn't enjoy in this one too much. I think that you could wrote it with some metaphors and create more powerful atmosphere.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    WOW!!!

    That was amazing!!! I am truly blown away by this poem. It is by far my fave by you ! The ending came to me at a totaly suprise and just left me saying woooow. I loved the repitition and the short sentences, it gave it a great pace. Well done *5/5* I truly enjoyed this one !

  • 16 years ago

    by Kasey

    Amaziing poem ur really a good writer.

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    That is strong! Wow, it made me shake! that is how i feel about myself, of course i dont do all of that but i got a mile long list! At first i thought you were hating your ex or bf for a second till i got all the way through! Wow-Really good!

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