She better be this for you

by LoveBird99   Sep 20, 2007


Is she beautiful and everything you hope for?
Is she the one you'll forever adore?

I hope that she's wonderfully kind and sweet
I hope that she makes your journey complete

I wonder if she dreams about you, in her gorgeous heart
I wonder if she's loved you, from the very start

She better hold you tight, and love you 'til the end
She better smile at every word, hug, and kiss you send

Hopefully she adores you, more than anyone in the past
Hopefully she is incredibly perfect, and this one will last

Will she be sweet to your family, and everyone you love?
Will she free your soul and make your heart sing like a dove?

May she love you, and care for you in every way
May her kiss be strong enough to take your breath away

Do you love her more than this whole world wide?
Do you open up your soul, so your emotions won't hide?

Your heart is beautiful; I can see the love in your eyes
Your heart is very loving, and your judgment is very wise

You are passionate about her, like nobody else
You are so incredible, and in your arms, I hope she melts

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  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I like the 2 line stanza structure - it's good to read something different.

    Anyway I think that you wrote this from your heart, good job. I think you should make this poem a little longer. anyway that's just a suggestion

    it's still a great poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    You want to know why I loved this poem? It's because of the questions. I love it when people ask questions in their poems. The flow and everything was good.

    Great job!

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Polaroid

    Wow this was really great, keep it up,
    i've read a couple of your poems now, and they are fantastical, so i was wondering if you could comment and vote on sum of my poems, it would be greatly appreciated.
    I'm new to writing poetry so i need some feedback, thanks,
    Polaroid
    p.s GREAT JOB