by LoveBird99 Sep 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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Is she beautiful and everything you hope for? |
by Marc Ortiz
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I like the 2 line stanza structure - it's good to read something different. |
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You want to know why I loved this poem? It's because of the questions. I love it when people ask questions in their poems. The flow and everything was good. |
by Polaroid
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Wow this was really great, keep it up, |